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Nurturer,
why do you wear pale blue, Nurturer?
There is a sky you know –
I know, in fact, that you know –
from which the sun seeps down in to the soil of your garden,
like water from your faucet fingers.
Are you envious of the sky, is that why you wear pale blue,
Nurturer.
(I could fetch it for you)

Or

Do you wish, Nurturer, that you lived in the sky,
and so you wear pale blue,
as sky people do?
The earth shames you; your garden shames you.
For next to the vibrant Lilies, and basic forms of blackberry pies,
there is a single Orchid that wilts,
and is sorry.
©2007-2009 ~IfGonzoWereALion
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:iconghbatt:
Wow, great piece. Intense imagery and meaning. i don't think my half-asleep self can fully appricheate it, but I really like it! The punctuation is great, the piece flows wonderfully!

Bravo!
-gh
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Thanks :D

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